Tuesday, 12 September 2017

WALT- use repetition

Excuses
Sorry Mum...
I really can’t eat dinner.
Cause i fought a nasty termite
Although i was the winner
I have lost my appetite .


Sorry Mum…
I saw a dissected frog.
Looking wasn’t easy.
So i sat down on a log.
Because i feel a bit queasy.


Sorry Mum…
I went to fun fun land.
And there was a roller coaster.
I almost lost my hand.
I can’t even eat bread from a toaster.


Sorry Mum…
I saw a guy called Pratham.
I asked him for his friendship.
Then he turned me to a muffin.
And then he sent me to his spaceship.


Sorry Mum…
I was forced to eat blue cheese.
Down at the dairy shop.
Where there were so many fleas.
Then i started to flop.


These excuses were made by me.
I now feel like a genius.
Read my verses, as you can see.
I am now very famous.








WALT-describe a moment in time





Intruders

Fwoosh! Fwoosh! Fwoosh! The serrated blades cut through the air like a automatic saw. “Oh no! Run for it guys!” as i shouted at the top of lungs while running as fast as my legs could carry me.  The Army had come to invade us when no one was expecting it.  The noise stabbed my airs and it felt like it was bleeding. Thump! The mechanical bird landed on the ground and soldiers started filtering out like ants from their mounds. Armed with P90’s and AUG’s , Bang! Bang! the muscular soldier fired a few shots in the air making my soul jump out of my skin .  My speed slowly decreased as i started to exhale deeply, heart thumping like crazy.  Trying my hardest to run but it felt like my feet were glued to the ground.  The soldiers started shouting were now chasing us like a wolf chasing sheep.

Saturday, 9 September 2017

WALT-describe a moment in time

WALT Describe a moment in time
  • Present tense
  • Describe what you think, see and feel
  • First person - I, we, my,
  • Descriptive language - adjectives, verbs, similes,
  • Range of sentence starters


Another normal day


I waited patiently and stared at the never changing traffic lights as flashing cars zoomed past me like mice fleeing from a hungry cat. The windy air washed my half awoken face. Then suddenly out of nowhere a gigantic shadow fell over me. “YAWN!, lovely morning,mate!” as my yeti friend walked forward with  his two pairs of giant, fuzzy legs and long, sharp pink toe nails. The big bunch of fur waited quietly as drivers tilted their head to the max to look at the furry beast in awe. DING! The traffic lights suddenly shined a bright green and me and my friend walked through the zebra line with ease. “See you tomorrow!” as my warm hearted friend turned the other direction and strided down the road. This was definitely  another normal day for me.

Johann:Ka pai! You did a amazing work on describing the best. You should work on changing you tenses

Thursday, 7 September 2017

WALT-write a narrative

Unhappy meal


Terry Dactyl ,a 11 year old boy loves to have a good old lunch  in the afternoon at the magnificent McDonald's Image result for mcdonalds.  As Terry walked through the automatic door,he got hit by a blast of air filled with the scrumptious smell of  burgers  and fries. He waited in the never-ending line  and  he smelled the aroma drifting around the fast food restaurant.  Eventually he got to the end of the mile long queue and ordered his meal and sat down patiently waiting,the noise of the kitchen was immense as Terry stopped himself from drooling from the delicious air.


After about  10 minutes Terry got impatient and he's still growing so he still has the curiosity of a youngster. He  swiftly  sneaked into the kitchen exploring what it’s like to be a cook. he walked around trying to stay hidden as much as possible. Ssssss! As the sizzling  oil drops jumped  and dropped out and landed on the ground  like burning acid rain. The steam covered the whole room. SSSSSSSSS! The cooks dipped the fries into the oil like they were torturing the fries.


Loud sounds ricocheted everywhere  of the metallic  walls. Terry continued his exploration around the kitchen as he prowled around keeping a low profile .He hid under a sink and watched giant legs brush past his hiding spot .  When he was just about done snooping around , Terry saw a happy meal that looked really interesting. Then suddenly curiosity struck  him again and he quickly peered into the box. But he he had to be aware of his surroundings , quickly taking one more look he suddenly bent to far and falled into the box headfirst, he closed his eyes hoping this was just a dream.


A few moments later he opened his eyes and caught a glimpse  of flying fries Flapping around him.  Mind blown, he stared around in awe as he floated down to the bottom of the box. Little tiny packs of tomato sauce got consumed by the oily predators. The flying fries flew up until Terry was at the bottom and the there was just a small hole of light at the top.  Rumble!  The earth shook with force as Terry stumbled around. Suddenly he sensed something with his ears that something large and dangerous was coming his way.


Roar! Stunned by the blasting roar he turned around slowly and he was face to face with a monster sized burger. Image result for cyanide and happiness personHe tried to  scream but nothing came out and his mouth. He could feel the hot, moist breath of the beast. He quickly turned around trying to run but it felt like his feet were glued to the ground.  Image result for burger spiderThe over-sized burger trudged  closely behind Terry.


The weight of the monster suddenly tipped the whole box over causing the top lid open. He made a mad sprint to the only way out. He quickly jumped out like a flea and rolled out the kitchen back to his seat, constantly keeping his eyes on the now midget happy meal box when a waiter comes to him and says “your order sir?”.






                                                                                             




Monday, 4 September 2017

WALT-Identify the main ideas in the text



We chose a topic from the Room 1 Tuesday 5th September and we could choose between google drawings or google slides and later uploading it to our blogs.


Sunday, 27 August 2017



Three Way Conferences - Thinking Hats for Year 4-6
What are the facts about school?  What concepts have you learned about?  What have you been involved in?
Share a piece of work that you are proud of.  Talk about the process of creating it.  What new skills did you learn? What have you done well?  
What is an area that you need to improve in?  Share a piece of work that you found challenging. What do you need to do to improve?  Do you need some help?
Reading Age: 10 years-11 years
Writing Level:3p
Maths strategy stage:early 7
Maths knowledge stage:6 advanced
Inquiry Topics:functions,taonga
Extra Curricular:swimming,wet day monitoring
This was a  piece of writing  i did which is my speech, it was a self written speech that i will share with the class in a few weeks.
Writing goal:write better vocabulary

Maths goal: write the equivalent


Work I will
This was a slide show me,Dev and Michael created to present information about bastion point occupation. The class was separated into 7 groups and each had a different topic.
What are your feelings about your learning?  What makes you happy at school?  Is there anything that worries you?
What are your thoughts about your learning?  How are you doing overall?
So what now?  Create some goals with your teacher and your parents. Is there something your teacher or you parents can help? (these could be started at your three way conference and finished later).
I feel good about my learning because the work is challenging and interesting,the subject that makes me most happy at school is art because i like drawing and crafting,nothing really worries me at school apart from some challenging maths that i don’t really know
My Strengths:  is probably art because i draw at home and i like to make things

My Challenges: is math because there are a lot of types that  i’m still stuck on.
By … I will have..
  we we filled in our three way conferences that we were going to show to our parents at parent interviews.